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I don’t know what to do
Here we are just me and you
A miracle coming is just untrue
I can’t believe how much we’ve gone through

There has to be a way out
There is no room in mind for doubt
We have to work our way about
This pain is something we can do without

We seem chained down by societies
They say that there is no escape
We look to the light even when it rains
We won’t listen to their proprieties
We can make our fates change shape
We can fight it and we can break the chains

They give us orders about how we should act
We are better off ignoring the facts
Their power over us seems to be cracked
We disappoint them by how we react

By the looks of it they’ll break down in frustration
It won’t take control of this generation
We are smarter for your information
And we smile at your sudden realization

We seem chained down by societies
They say that there is no escape
We look to the light even when it rains
We won’t listen to their proprieties
We can make our fates change shape
We can fight it and we can break the chains

Now that this has been addressed
We would like to break the chains
Obviously as you should have guessed
Now that anger is pulsing in their veins

We seem chained down by societies
They say that there is no escape
We look to the light even when it rains
We won’t listen to their proprieties
We can make our fates change shape
We can fight it and we can break the chains

We seem chained down by societies
They say that there is no escape
We look to the light even when it rains
We won’t listen to their proprieties
We can make our fates change shape
We can fight it and we can break the chains
Written by me!

I wanted to write a story with the word 'chains' XD Based off of the idea that the future generations will overcome the past generations!
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Hitomigreen15 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
*Bill clap* Yay that was awesome!!!! ^^
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nejicanspin Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
lol thank you! ^^
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Hitomigreen15 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
You're Welcome!! :D
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Hikari-ChanluvsBill Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
I'm telling you! Your poems/songs are just awesome, I give you a ten!
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nejicanspin Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you! ^^ :iconredbullglompplz:
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KrazyPenguin Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
Geezumz, this is like the perfect discription of whats kinda going on with me now...
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nejicanspin Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
idk if I should cool or not @_@ XD
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KrazyPenguin Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
Its really good don't get me wrong! :XD: I love it!
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nejicanspin Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
lol thank you! ^^
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KrazyPenguin Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
Your welcome! :D
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